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Fairy Tales

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Image size
900x600px 465.94 KB
Make
SONY
Model
SLT-A77V
Shutter Speed
1/500 second
Aperture
F/1.4
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Apr 12, 2014, 11:45:21 AM
Sensor Size
3mm
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OliviaMichalski's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Hi! This piece is so outstanding I had to write a critique.

Let's start with the vision and impact. The thumb directly attracted my attention and I literally HAD to click on it! The colors are wonderful and very soft! The soft vignette also directs the watchers eye to the flower.

Concerning the technique I have to say something that may not only concern this image, but also you other ones. All your images are very high qualified, but the only thing that makes me say "argh, fast perfekt" is the fact that you oversharpen the main object. A bit less is always more, remember that <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/> If you did not oversharp the main focus point, I would have given an overall 5/5 stars rating.

I hope you do not see my critique as an insult, it is supposed to be a little hint what a little deviant thinks about your images. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="349" title="Aww"/>

Bleib dran, du hast Talent!